Aug
3rd
2019
Mid-Day Blog Post #11 · 8:48pm Aug 3rd, 2019
Update on Textbook Soldier's rewrite! We're about halfway through the story, and things are going good. I like the way things are now better than before, but that's just me. Some of you may hate it. Here's what I'm cutting out (the big things so far).
- Shifting all the POV away from James for reasons
- Giving more realistic and genuine reactions from all involved
- Cutting out the random freakout breakdown from Chapter 5 where everyone thinks they're from a book
